Too much sex? Mebbe.
I'm still working on the erotica. I think I'm going to cut out the last sex scene and put it in somewhere down the road. I feel like that's all my characters are doing. They're not complaining or anything, LOL, I simply think I'm going to slow down on the sex and rev up the conflict.
Since this is my first foray into this steamy territory, I don't want overkill.
On another writing note--I heard back from my editor. She tells me "Virtually Yours" should be edited by May 13th. FRIDAY May 13th. She thought that was rather humorous. *grinning* Evil. Just plain evil.
I'm going to go rework some of the erotica. Do a little research. And perhaps read some more of my book I won. On page 72 now. I'll weigh in after I'm done with it.
5 months ago