Too much sex? Mebbe.
I'm still working on the erotica. I think I'm going to cut out the last sex scene and put it in somewhere down the road. I feel like that's all my characters are doing. They're not complaining or anything, LOL, I simply think I'm going to slow down on the sex and rev up the conflict.
Since this is my first foray into this steamy territory, I don't want overkill.
On another writing note--I heard back from my editor. She tells me "Virtually Yours" should be edited by May 13th. FRIDAY May 13th. She thought that was rather humorous. *grinning* Evil. Just plain evil.
I'm going to go rework some of the erotica. Do a little research. And perhaps read some more of my book I won. On page 72 now. I'll weigh in after I'm done with it.
Grins*
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Msybe the fact they are having sex all the time is the conflict. One or the other starts to feel that the relationship is totally based on sex and has no real strong basis for being long term because of it? Just an idea.
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